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26 comments:

  1. I had high expectations on this page, but unfortunately it was a bit of a disappointment with only a lot of speech bubbles and no images/pictures.
    It would have been nice to see what they were doing. ;)

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    1. This chapter is only one pag left to get finished. In fact, this sequence was a last minute change, I had no intentions to extend it with more graphic action, as it will be up to next chapters.

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    2. I understand that you chose to do to make this page the way you did if it is only one page left of this chapter. But you are such a good and talented illustrator that I felt that we missed a whole page with your great pictures. That was why I was a bit disappointed. But now, with your explanation, I understand why you did what you did. I am looking forward to the next page and next chapter (as I ALWAYS do).

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  2. aj muy ruidosos! poor granny...
    thanks for the page

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  3. I rather like the fact you need to use your imagination a bit to visualize what they were doing! Well, it works for my pervy imagination, anyway! LOL! Great page!

    I sent you a link to my unfinished PWP fic I told you about! I think you'll like it a great deal!

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    1. Thank you so much, dear!, although it seems that this kind of narrative jokes aren´t for all people, but I was already aware about these possible reactions, LOL.

      I´ll reply you today, btw!

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  4. This was a funny one, i liked it. Cant wait for the next one.
    Thx for the update :)

    *TsukiLunar*

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  5. Looks like we got cheated out of some hot scenes... especially what sounds like Winry milking his prostate. Cheap.

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    1. Looks like certain people remembers to give feedback only when it´s about things that do not meet their expectations, LOL.
      I refer you to my reply on the first comment.

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    2. How can you even presume to know that when my post is anonymous? I've posted compliments before.

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    3. Seriously!, and how can you presume that I would know who is each anonymous who comment here?!, for God´s sake! O__o

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    4. *shrug* I'd more or less just presume that if the post is anonymous then you can't really tell if that anon is one of the "certain people" who remember to give feedback "only when" its about things that don't meet their expectations, as you put it. Look, my original comment was harsh, and I'm sorry for the disrespect. I could have found a better way to write that without being an ass, and you deserved better. I hope my rudeness doesn't wind up deterring you from doing what you like and posting it.

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    5. Yes, I understand what you say, but the internet is way too big. My comment wasn´t refered directly to you, in the few hours after I posted the page I got several private messages from poeple a bit dissapointed with the page (some nicer, some disrespectful), and this has been a rare case, as the most of my readers never left comments that fast. lol.
      I´m not mad with you, so I also want to apology if I was rude. I truly appreciate you and all the readers who follows this comic and takes the time to leave their impressions, positive and negative, as it helps me to improve and grow up in this activity. :)

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    6. I like the way you phrased that. "The Internet is way too big." I LOLed when I saw that, but you've got a point. There are too many trolls on here to take anything anyone says too seriously. Don't be hard on yourself, Len

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  6. ô.ô....Por una parte quiero saber .. y por la otra mejor no.
    Son muy muy muy kinky... Super kinky XD

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    1. Jajajajajajajaja, por eso lo dejé a la imaginación, que si no es que no cierro el capítulo. XD

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  7. YESSSSSSSSSSSS...wonder where her pinkie is? LOL...this was a fun page, even without all the dick...though I anticipate some full frontal Ed some time...pretty please?? 0.0

    -msmazzo

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    1. Of course!! there will be a lot of Ed from all sides *drool* ^_______^

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    2. I love you so much. OMG. -msmazzo

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  8. Huuhhh.. some hot dialogue there... I feel so teased not seeing whats happening! YOU CLIT TEASE *sobs* PLEASE tell me when you make more that we get to actually SEE Winry milking Edward's prostate, and whatever it is he's doing to her, too? *__* (making her squirt, maybe? Or pressing down on her belly and fingering her G spot while thumbing her clit simultaneously?? O___O omg omg) After this I kinda wonder if Winry will ever get mad at Edward and peg his smart ass. <3 Anyway, thanks for bearing with all my comments, and for creating and sharing this goodness with all of us!! <3 <3

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  9. Now that was a let down... I was also expecting a bit more action on this page but since you're saving the hot shots for later, I guess we can expect some high quality drawings !
    Keep up the good work !! ;)

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  10. Oh man. I am sorry I didn't comment on this! I found myself giggling a lot in this page and gosh they are so darned cute. I really wanna draw more nfsw edwin because you do inspire me to but I haven't really found what I want to do yet!

    Anyway this was a good page and I'm sorry that you received some criticism to it. You obviously have more in store and don't want to throw it all in one chapter. Also your talented and you don't deserve that. Keep up the good work! I would log in to blogger but I'm too lazy to.

    ~Lunasaga

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    1. Thanks!, no prob, I´m not angry by the critics. The most of us love icecream, but if you eat TOO much at once, you get bored too soon and you may get an stomach ache, that´s my idea about het stuff too, the beautiful things come out slowly. (Sorry for my english).

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  11. -snort- This page is hilarious, I like how you did it.

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