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  1. 0.o ......

    I think my brain has finally exploded from all this hotness!

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  2. Ed's shirt if off! yay! I am enjoying older Edward. :)

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  3. I agree with Buggyness :3
    What can I say but PLEASE, MOOOOOOORE? >.<

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  4. This is so amazing, and so f***ing HOT!! i think im going to faint...

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  5. Wow. Ed is really quite ripped. Look at those washboard abs!

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  6. Excuse me while I change my pants.

    Okay, Edward in that bottom panel. His fucking FACE. Brows furrowed and eyes thinned. What puts your work above all the other EdWin doujin I've read (and in fact, MOST of the doujin I've read) is that fact that you give so much emotive attention to the man's reactions--usually guys are drawn so stoic, but here he's not just hot, he's earnest. There's this implied vulnerability in his face too, when he fucks her, this hard reality that he's just fucking the shit out of her and it's too much to handle. It's not just sex--his feelings are present, too.

    I am also a HUGE fan of how you've drawn Winry here, both on the top left and in the middle panel. Really captured her rapture excellently there, that moment when you're just getting completely overcome by a guy *___* So good. Just seeing her body seize and thrown back, losing herself. Also holy shit, I am SERIOUSLY loving the structural soundness of her body, particularly the contours of her leg and her belly, there's some strong anatomical poetry there, and it's super appreciated. The fold of her skin as he grips her waist, too--it makes Winry look REAL there, its super convincing.

    You seriously get an award for this one. I'm going to need to start drawing my own EdWin porn now. ITS ALL YOUR FAULT <3 <3 <3

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